I'm Lauren Schifer. My "fun fact" was that I'm an only child, I have three jobs, and I had a pet tarantula. I work at Holliter Co, Bdubs, and I'm an optometric assistant. All three are fun. I was born in Florida but moved to Ohio when I was four. In my free time I like outdoors activities, taking naps, and going to concerts. My major is Business Admin but I still have no idea what I want to be when I grow up.
While writing my poem I took the time to look over some pictures and notes that my friend Amber and I had written back and forth. I have an incredibly short attention span so I would write a few lines, then make a sandwich, write some more, then take a nap. I took quite awhile for me to get it finished. Some challeges were that I don't write poetry so I wasn't sure how it should sound and time has been an issue for me the past week. I think my poem turned out okay, I seem to make slight changes every time I re-read it.
18 years, 1 month, 19 days
Instant
best friends at eight years old
Laying
pool side at each other’s houses on hot summer days
I’d
be eating pink popsicles and saving the blue one’s for you
After
that summer we became more like sisters
Saying
things like “I can’t wait to come home, and by home I mean your house”
At
age twelve, watching scary movies and staying up all night
Eating
cookie dough and planning out the rest of our lives
Graduating
from school, marrying rock-stars, and having next door mansions
We
would always be best friends, no matter what
Turning
fourteen, we were sneaking out to meet the high school boys
Helping
each other up the trellis and through the bedroom window
Back
in bed by 4:00a.m. thinking our parents would never know we were gone
Angelic
smile, petite frame, crystal blue eyes, and completely fearless
I
couldn’t have asked for a better partner in crime
Sweet
sixteen, cheerleading, shopping for prom dresses, and getting our hair done
Going
out with our boyfriends to the old Bucyrus Movie Theater
Only
two more years and we would be off to college together
Some birds can’t be caged was the motto
you lived by
We
couldn’t wait to go off on our own
Finally
eighteen, no more curfew or rules to follow
Planning
our trip to the Hershey Park the summer after graduation
Real
life was finally starting with what seemed like a list of never ending
possibilities
18
years, 1 month, and 19 days
Our
future plans and our ten year friendship came to an end
Your
final words still “hanging” in the air
“Only
the Good Die Young”
You’ll
always be remembered as my best friend.
My favorite passage in Holding On so far is Moreese Nickham, Prisoner. I thought it was a very heart breaking story that he was shot first and when he responded by killing two white officers he was then sentenced to life in prison. There have always been flaws in our judicial system but the fact that the govenor kept ignoring his pardon to be released was ridiculous. "See, we can't hurry the Lord= He got his own set time to dowhat he gonna do. I might be too old to walk, or might not be worth anything, but I'm goin' to get outta this. I been lookin' forward tothat day of a long time. I believe its gonna come. I hope so." That is my favorite passage becuase it shows what a dreamer Bickham is. He had been in prison for the better part of his life, over 35 years. He's missed his children growing up and society changing but he was still hopeful that he was going to be free. Eventually he got to spend his twilight years with his wife, children, grandchildren, and great-grandchildren.
Your attention span sounds about like mine. I really do like how you formatted your poem in ages and happenings.
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Your poem is really good! I am also majoring in business.
ReplyDeleteAs you said we chose the same passage from the Moreese Bickham profile, so I definitely agree with that choice. Also, your poem is very nice and it's clear that you put a lot of effort into it.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very detailed i enjoyed reading it, nice job!
ReplyDeleteI thought your poem was very good. I can't believe you had a pet tarantula, spiders creep me out to no end! I used to work at Abercrombie and Fitch when I was in Toledo last semester, so I can relate on that aspect.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very heartfelt and relatable. Best friends like that are a dime a dozen. Cherish those memories forever :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem was really good! Agreeing with the comment above, Best Friends are the people you make the best memories with:)
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